this is a short story i wrote a little over a year ago that i just re read tonight and i can honestly say i really dig it. *high fives self*. so yeah, enjoy!
it tastes like rain. like earthworms. like dark, wet black soil. it smells like when you’re on your way to school after a good rain storm. you walk on worms that have been washed out of their worm holes the entire way to your elementary school. it tastes like playing god or the closest you’re gunna get when you’re eleven years old. everything looked like it was shades of gray- the trees, the grass, the houses, the streets, the air… all monochromatic shades of concrete and metal. i didn’t ordinarily see everything so colourlessly, let me assure you. there was just something so cold and lifeless about that particular morning that even an eleven year old could feel. i sat on the big front steps of my house in my yellow rubber boots and my blue spring jacket waiting for fun to come and find me, or at least inspiration for something better to do. i think my clothes may have been the only colour i could see, just like in a black and white movie, where you only ever noticed red and blue. i had a ball that i found outside my school. i took it and i knew it was wrong of me but i didn’t care. it wasn’t mine. but i took it, just the same, and i hid it in the right front pocket of my blue spring jacket and i walked home with my guilt/liberty well concealed. i got it home and i hid it under some rocks beside the porch and i kept it there because i liked my first taste of defiance but i feared the repercussions so i buried the ball. i think that was the first time i knowingly did something that i knew was completely wrong, yet still did because i was eleven years old, and i was beginning to try things MY way, which oddly enough was the complete opposite of the way i was told. i toyed with my stolen ball and watched the street for nothing in particular. i remember the hedges at the front of our lawn right next to the street. they were tall and thick and reminded me of a fortress from a castle. i remember seeing the top of what looked to be a mans head walking on the sidewalk on the other side of the hedge. he must have been a giant to be taller than those hedges. i was terrified of this person even though i hadn’t even seen the man. yet i watched the gray head walking past and past and past the gray hedges against the gray sky and the gray grass and gray gray gray, only getting closer to the place the leafy fortress and the driveway met, revealing a cement driveway and no place to hide. my body shrunk up and i hid my face in my lap and kept only my eyes visible. the man stopped where the hedges stopped and he was the biggest man i had ever seen. towering, even from that distance, with these small black eyes peering at me from beneath thick, furrowed eyebrows. his hair was thin and flat to his head and nose was big. he was ugly. his hands looked like baseball mitts hanging at both his sides like weights in a pair of stockings. he had a blue coat like mine. colour. his coat was the only other colour i remember that day. the man began to walk. but not across the driveway and back behind the hedges on the opposite side away away away from me. he walked slowly. he walked up the driveway. he didn’t break eye contact with me, it was like even though i was as small and invisible as i could possibly be, he still saw me there behind my arms and my knees and he knew exactly where to find me and he would. the vacant look on his face didn’t change and he walked in a straight line, head forward, eerily slowly towards me with distinct purpose in his eyes. i was too terrified to move, maybe partially too proud because i was 11 years old and big boys don’t scream or cry or run away. they hide the evidence and dig it up when their parents aren’t around and they appreciate it like a grown man appreciates an expensive cigar or a porno magazine. invisibleinvisibleinvisible. the mans feet were bigger than any feet i’d ever seen. the kind of feet they’d use to make the fake bigfoot footprints at tacky souvenir shops. his eyes. i couldn’t breathe. who was he. why was he coming towards me why wasn’t he saying anything graygraygray. i closed my eyes as hard as i could and wished that it would end. i wished i would open my eyes and the colour would suddenly come rushing back into the world like when you hit the top of an old tv and your picture fixes itself. i wished i was 6 so i could yell and scream and somebody would come and save me and it would all be forgotten by the time i was old enough to understand. i could feel him nearing me, i could feel his gaze burning through my defenses. he was so close. i braced myself for something i didn’t know how to brace myself for. he was so close. waited. i felt… nothing. still nothing. nothing. still nothing. it felt like forever and i knew something happened that altered what seemed to be my imminent fate on my front porch that dismal day. even within that thick nothingness that might ordinarily imply things are ok, i knew they weren’t. i could taste it in the air, the taste of top soil and walking on worms all the way to class. i knew that something big had just happened. i knew the silence meant worse things then what sounds would. sounds are for dramatic effect. this situation didn’t need it. i opened one eye and then the other and peeked over my arms hugging my knees. the gray man was lying on the cement in front of me, motionless not more than 5 feet away. his head twisted to the side, his skin looked the same colour as the cement his arms bent twice beside his head. his eyes were open like i’d never seen before. widegray. eyes open so wide you know it can only mean that the person saw their life flash before their eyes and by the time you find them, they’re already gone. but their eyes are watching that same reel until somebody can turn it off. the kind of dead eyes they put coins on in movies. this is what death was to me at eleven years old- black and white movies and coins and bigfoot and baseball gloves for hands. that was how i understood what was happening…this is how i made it real. eleven year old associations for a situation that i still could never explain. he didn’t move. he fell to the ground silently- the world was an old black and white opera and the volume didn’t work. he took his final bow and the volume didn’t work. i didn’t move. i didn’t know what to feel. it smelled like soil and earthworms and rain and everything was dead quiet and and those were things i understood at eleven years old. everything was in monochromatic shades of gray except his blue coat and my blue coat and my rubber boots. and i don’t know what that meant.my ball fell from my hands and bounced down the big wooden stairs, thump thump slowmotionthump step by step until it came to a stop against the mans still body. the ball was gray. his coat was blue. he was dead in front of me.his life ended a stolen balls toss away from me and his coat was blue and i was eleven years old and the world was gray that day.